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Topic: New original on a Ritt |
Chris Grotewohl
From: Kansas City (Roeland Park)
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Chris Grotewohl
From: Kansas City (Roeland Park)
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Posted 11 Feb 2014 2:58 pm
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Hey Folks,
I guess I posted this to get some feedback on the tune, playing etc... or just scratch it. I'm still a newbie really, but like to be original also, and most importantly, always welcome any members advice or criticism.
Thanks again, Chris |
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Ed Heins
From: Ohio, USA
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Posted 12 Feb 2014 12:40 am
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OK I'm a real newbie as well, and I think it's an interesting piece, what I can hear. For some reason, whether it's my speakers or your recording I can't hear what's going on when you move up to some of the higher pitched parts. It seems to go a bit muddy up there when you seem to transition out of a major into a diminished sounding chord but I'm playing this on a laptop in China, so I suspect my setup may have something to do with that. At any rate for us newbies, I think it's important to get some reinforcement so keep on doin it dude . I just added some steel to a Mandarin Language country song that I'm working up. Some local folks have decided to "Improve" my phrasing of the lyrics so I'm waiting to see what the rewrite looks like I find I like critique better than criticism _________________ Sierra S-10, GFI SM-10, Martin DM, Fender B250, Peavy Millenium, Ampeg B15N |
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