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Topic: "There Stands the Grass"-need your help with lyric |
Larry Lenhart
From: Ponca City, Oklahoma
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Posted 16 Aug 2013 2:16 pm
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While mowing the grass for the nth time this week, I was thinking of the old WEbb Pierce song, and thinking I need to change the lyrics...this is all I can come up with:
There Stands the grass
mow it down to look trim
.....etc
You guys are clever, add to it please |
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Alan Brookes
From: Brummy living in Southern California
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Joachim Kettner
From: Germany
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Posted 17 Aug 2013 7:19 am
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...So when I've done it I will have one trouble less. _________________ Fender Kingman, Sierra Crown D-10, Evans Amplifier, Soup Cube. |
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Alan Brookes
From: Brummy living in Southern California
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Posted 17 Aug 2013 9:35 am
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Joachim Kettner wrote: |
...So when I've done it I will have one trouble less. |
...one trouble fewer. |
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Joachim Kettner
From: Germany
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Posted 17 Aug 2013 11:47 am
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One less trouble would have rhymed even worse, than on trouble fewer, Alan. _________________ Fender Kingman, Sierra Crown D-10, Evans Amplifier, Soup Cube. |
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Joe Casey
From: Weeki Wachee .Springs FL (population.9)
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Posted 20 Aug 2013 5:32 am
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There stands all the Grass, Fill the pipe to the brim, Until my thoughts they go dim, It's not my first one today. There stands the Grass, The Piles falling real fast, Looks like it won't last, brother I'm on my way. willie may like this. |
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Larry Lenhart
From: Ponca City, Oklahoma
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Posted 20 Aug 2013 7:11 am
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Joe,,,haha that is a good one...a different twist, perhaps verse 2... Thanks for the suggestions. |
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Barry Blackwood
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Joe Casey
From: Weeki Wachee .Springs FL (population.9)
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Posted 20 Aug 2013 12:26 pm
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Larry Verse two the Chorus. I'm wondering where I am tonight, smoke so much lost my sight they should find me just about at dawn, When the big grass pile is gone. There use to stand the Grass, Please don't make a fuss, It's now on Willies bus, On the road again just can't --------
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Joachim Kettner
From: Germany
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Posted 20 Aug 2013 12:52 pm
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Joe could you writ the chords above or elswhere, so we know where we are _________________ Fender Kingman, Sierra Crown D-10, Evans Amplifier, Soup Cube. |
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chris ivey
From: california (deceased)
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Posted 21 Aug 2013 7:55 pm
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i'm still working on my big number, '(i'm proud to be a) Mahu from Oahu'. i was inspired by the transvestite streetwalkers when i was there many years ago. |
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John Peay
From: Cumming, Georgia USA
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Posted 23 Aug 2013 8:45 am Actually...
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...you should hire someone to cut it for you, then you could write "Just a Lawn I Used to Mow"...
(Ok, sorry, couldn't help it....I was recently playing along with "Just a Girl I Used to Know")... |
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Ken Lang
From: Simi Valley, Ca
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Posted 23 Aug 2013 3:30 pm
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There stands the grass
I've mowed it all down
Some places are brown
And it's giving me pain
There stands the grass
It's thirsty like me
Whatever will be
Brother we need some rain. _________________ heavily medicated for your safety |
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